Three jobs
학생이 쓴 원문
Can you name three jobs you can be good at? For me, first, I can be good at compositor. I can handle NukeX program well. Second, I can be good at social worker. I can be polite to people who need help. Finally, I can be good at barista. I can learn how to make nice coffee.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Justin. Thank you so much for taking your time to do your homework. I appreciate it so much. Keep up the good work and see you in class! ^^
-T. Julia
For me, first, I can be good at compositor.
>> Correct
OR >> First, I can excel as a compositor.
I can handle NukeX program well.
>> Correct
OR >> I am proficient with the NukeX program.
Second, I can be good at social worker.
>> Second, I can be a good social worker.
I can be polite to people who need help.
>> Correct
Finally, I can be good at barista.
>> Finally, I can be a good barista.
I can learn how to make nice coffee.
>> I can learn how to make nice coffee.
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