Three jobs I can be good at!
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Three jobs I can be good at!
Hi, I just show you my jobs that i can be good at. (Not really good at)
>>Hi, I just want to tell you the jobs that I can be good at. (I’m not really good at them).
First one is coding.
>>The first one is coding.
Actually, My Second major is \"Computer Engineering\".
>>Actually, my Second major is Computer Engineering.
I learned about computers and programming in that.
>>I learned about computers and programming on this major.
And my Club was made by people interested in development.
>>And my club was made up of people who are interested in developments.
I love my skill and be proud of it.
>>I love my skill and I’m proud of it.
When I go to London for walking Holiday with work visa.
>>When I went to London on a Working Holiday visa.
I want get a job to show my skill.
>>I want to get a job to show my skills.
Second one is jogging.
>>The second one is jogging.
I love walking alone with many things to think of.
>>I love walking alone while thinking about many things.
When I have a stress for work or circumstances, I just walk for my house.
>>When I have stress because of work or because of some circumstances, I just take a walk near my house.
I takes a few minute.
>>It takes just a few minutes.
But I feel much better.
CORRECT!
or>>But I feel a lot better afterwards.
Lastone is playing with my younger brother.
>>The last one is playing with my younger brother.
He loves me(maybe?)
CORRECT!
or>>Maybe, he loves me too.
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