Three nutrients

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The given charts illustrate the average percentages of three types of elements in four times of meals in the USA. 

>> The given charts illustrate the average percentages of three types of elements in four different meals in the USA. 

It gives information on the three types of unhealthy nutrients if we consume too much and current consuming situation of the three nutrients by the USA residents. 

>> It gives information on the three types of unhealthy nutrients if we consume too much and current consumption of the three nutrients by the USA residents. 

There are three kinds of nutrients which are Sodium, Saturated fat and Added sugar. 

>> Correct

The people in USA eat a lot of these three nutrients in dinner, 43%, 37% and 23% respectively. 

>> The people in the USA eat a lot of these three nutrients at dinner, 43%, 37% and 23% respectively. 

However, dinner is not the time of the most consumed added sugar, it is consumed the most with snacks at 42%. 

>> However, dinner is not the meal when added sugar is consumed the most.

it is consumed the most with snacks at 42%. 

>> The highest consumption is with snacks at 42%.

When they eat breakfast, all the three elements are not consumed too much compared to in the other typical meals. 

>> When they eat breakfast, all the three elements are not consumed too much compared to the other typical meals. 

The consumed percentages of three nutrients in lunch are not higher than the times of dinner and snakes.

>> The percentages of consumption of the three nutrients at lunch are not higher than those at dinner and snacks.  

Through these pie charts, people can know that the USA residents do not eat these nutrients a lot in breakfast and lunch, 

>> Through these pie charts, people can know that the USA residents do not consume these nutrients a lot at breakfast and lunch.

however, they eat the nutrients too much with snacks and in dinner over the 50% of the whole percentages. 

>> However, they consume the nutrients too much with snacks and at dinner with over 50% of the whole percentage.