three things
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
HAPPY MONDAY! Lunar New Year is co[이름]g up!
Thank you so much, Mrs. [Name] for doing your homework.
Keep up the great work!
I\'m looking forward to our next class.
~Teacher Eve.
I have been good at cooking embroidery drawing
>> I have been good at cooking, embroidery, drawing.
but as I get older my sight getting bad it was not focused on so I lost interest in things
>> But as I get older, my sight has been worsening, I\'m not able to focus so I have losing interest in things.
as time goes by I.m not trying to start something new
>> As time goes by, I\'m trying to start something new.
my health made me change now I prefer static exercises to an energetic one
>> My health has changed me now. I prefer static exercises to an energetic one.
recently I just go to the cafe and take a walk
>> Recently I just go to the café and take a walk.
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