Three things that I bought
학생이 쓴 원문
I bought snacks and drinks today after school.
They were from at the convenience store in front of my house.
And I bought a lip stain again because I wanted to buy different colors with what I had before.
It was on March 7th and from at the olive young.
Last, I bought a lot of notebooks on February 20th
Because I need notebooks to hand writing at school.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]! Great job on accomplishing your homework. I corrected the grammar, punctuation, and rephrased some sentences for clarity.
Sincerely,
^^ T. Ara
I bought snacks and drinks today after school.
>>> CORRECT!!!
They were from at the convenience store in front of my house.
They were from at the convenience store in front of my house.
>>> They were from the convenience store in front of my house.
And I bought a lip stain again because I wanted to buy different colors with what I had before.
And I bought a lip stain again because I wanted to buy different colors with what I had before.
>>> I also bought a lip stain again because I wanted to try different colors from what I had before.
It was on March 7th and from at the olive young.
It was on March 7th and from at the olive young.
>>> I got it on March 7th from Olive Young.
Last, I bought a lot of notebooks on February 20th
Last, I bought a lot of notebooks on February 20th
>>> Lastly, I bought a lot of notebooks on February 20th
Because I need notebooks to hand writing at school.
Because I need notebooks to hand writing at school.
>>> because I need them for handwriting at school.
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