three tings i am grateful for.
학생이 쓴 원문
First, that i have healthy body is what i am grateful for.
second, it is winter vacation now! so l can sleep more.
Last, my school teacher gave not many vacation homework to me! so i\'m grateful for now.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Stella! ^^
T[이름]k you for writing your first homework! I\'m glad to hear these simple things you are grateful for. :) We will be more appreciative if we think about the things for which we are grateful. ^^
See you tomorrow~
-T.Jhozel
First, that i have healthy body is what i am grateful for.
>> First, the fact that I have a healthy body is something for which I am grateful.
second, it is winter vacation now! so l can sleep more.
>> Correct! (Just use the proper capitalization)
>>Second, it is winter vacation now! So I can sleep more.
>>Second, it is winter vacation now! So I can sleep more.
Last, my school teacher gave not many vacation homework to me! so i\'m grateful for now.
>>Lastly, I received a small amount of vacation homework from my teacher! So I\'m t[이름]kful for what I have now.
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