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Hi! Tina. As time goes by, autumn will be coming to us. During the day a change of temperature has been a little bit, be care ful youself. At morning class, i told you about korea subway. So in this time, i let you know korea subway(history and system...) First, Subway was made in 1970s. we've calling No.1 line which color is deep blue. after ten years, No.2/ 3/ 4 were set under groud. As time goes by, now we have No.9 line. of course, it apply seoul area, only. In korea, Subway system has managing in Busan, Daegu, kwangju, Daejun. only 5 cities have the subway system. (except seoul, the other's line only 1 or 3.) It is quick and exact. Also compared with other country( ex. japan, england..) the transportation cost ia cheap. Hope this is useful to you.

Hi [이름], It뭩 really nice to know about the subway system in your country. I really hope that I can ride them my self if there's a chance for me to visit your country soon. Happy weekend!! See you again on Monday! Here are your corrections Hi! Tina.As time goes by, autumn will be coming to us. >>correct!!During the day a change of temperature has been a little bit, be care ful youself. >>During these days, there's a change in temperature so be careful.At morning class, i told you about korea subway. >>During our class, I told you about our subway. So in this time,i let you know korea subway(history and system...) >>So this time, I want you to know more about Korea's subway, its history and system.First, Subway was made in 1970s. >> The first subway was made in 1970s. we've calling No.1 line which color is deep blue. >>We've been known to have the number one line and the train color is deep blue.after ten years, No.2/ 3/ 4 were set under groud. >>After ten years, number 2, 3 and 4 were set underground. As time goes by, now we have No.9 line. >>correct!of course, it apply seoul area, only. >>Of course, it only applies in Seoul. In korea, Subway system has managing in Busan, Daegu, kwangju, Daejun. >>In Korea, subway system has been managed in Busan, Daegu, Kwangju and Daejun. only 5 cities have the subway system. >>Only five cities have the subway system.(except seoul, the other's line only 1 or 3.) >>(Except for Seoul, for others they only have 1 or 3 lines.) It is quick and exact. >>Correct Also compared with other country( ex. japan, england..) the transportation cost ia cheap.>>Also compared to other countries like Japan or in England, the transportation cost is cheap. Hope this is useful to you. >>Correct!!