Thursday homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Claire\'s homework
강사 첨삭
1.I want to grow up taller.>>I want to grow up taller than now.
2.My freind went to trip and bought a present for me.>>My friend went to a trip and bought a present for me.
3.I have a surprise for you.>>CORRECTOR>>This is a surprise for you. 4.We will be a same team at gym class.>>We will be in the same team in our gym class.
5.Take a picture of us please.>>CORRECTOR>>Can you take a picture of us, please?
6.They are member of art club.>>They are members of the art club.
7.He want to be a police when he grow up.>>He wants to be a police officer when he grows up.
8.She was planing to go to travel at summer vacation.>>She was planning to go to travel in summer vacation.
9.I need to clean all these stuff before parents coming.>>I need to clean all these stuff before my parents come.
10.This is the most pretty doll ever I seen! >>This is the prettiest doll I have ever seen!
Very good, Claire.
- T. Melody ^^
2.My freind went to trip and bought a present for me.>>My friend went to a trip and bought a present for me.
3.I have a surprise for you.>>CORRECTOR>>This is a surprise for you. 4.We will be a same team at gym class.>>We will be in the same team in our gym class.
5.Take a picture of us please.>>CORRECTOR>>Can you take a picture of us, please?
6.They are member of art club.>>They are members of the art club.
7.He want to be a police when he grow up.>>He wants to be a police officer when he grows up.
8.She was planing to go to travel at summer vacation.>>She was planning to go to travel in summer vacation.
9.I need to clean all these stuff before parents coming.>>I need to clean all these stuff before my parents come.
10.This is the most pretty doll ever I seen! >>This is the prettiest doll I have ever seen!
Very good, Claire.
- T. Melody ^^
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