Thursday homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Claire\'s homework
강사 첨삭
1.Parents should care about there children.>>CORRECTOR>>Parents must care about there children.2.Most of stores are closed at midnight.>>Most stores are closed at midnight.3.We need to complete something we need to do and take a break.>>CORRECTOR>>We should complete the things we need to do before taking a break.
4.The cout down is start when it is December 30th 12:59.>>The count down starts on December 30th at 12:59.
5.We are claping after we saw a wonderful performance.>>We are clapping after we saw a wonderful performance. 6.After we chewed gum, we need to wrap it with paper and put it in to trashcan.>>After we chewed the gum, we need to wrap it with paper and put it in the trashcan.
7.New born babies are cry day and night.>>New born babies cry day and night. 8.My aunt cut her long hair to short hair.>>CORRECTOR>>My aunt cut her long hair short. 9.This year\'s olympic is cancel because of the virus.>>This year\'s Olympic is canceled because of the virus.
10.I carry my suitcase in the airport. >>CORRECTOR>>I carry my carrier in the airport. 11.My grandfather\'s hobby is fishing he likes to catch big fishes.>>My grandfather\'s hobby is fishing and he likes to catch big fishes.Very good, Claire.- T. Melody ^^
4.The cout down is start when it is December 30th 12:59.>>The count down starts on December 30th at 12:59.
5.We are claping after we saw a wonderful performance.>>We are clapping after we saw a wonderful performance. 6.After we chewed gum, we need to wrap it with paper and put it in to trashcan.>>After we chewed the gum, we need to wrap it with paper and put it in the trashcan.
7.New born babies are cry day and night.>>New born babies cry day and night. 8.My aunt cut her long hair to short hair.>>CORRECTOR>>My aunt cut her long hair short. 9.This year\'s olympic is cancel because of the virus.>>This year\'s Olympic is canceled because of the virus.
10.I carry my suitcase in the airport. >>CORRECTOR>>I carry my carrier in the airport. 11.My grandfather\'s hobby is fishing he likes to catch big fishes.>>My grandfather\'s hobby is fishing and he likes to catch big fishes.Very good, Claire.- T. Melody ^^
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