Thursday homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Claire\'s homework
강사 첨삭
Hello Claire!
Thank you for the wonderful writing today. It was very fun to read ^^ Anyway, it\'s okay if you can\'t send pictures for now. I understand <3 You are very fun to talk to so everything\'s fine. See you tomorrow!
~~Teacher Kate
I didn\'t remember the first time I used internet, but I bought smartphone at 3rd grade.
>>I didn\'t remember the first time I used the internet, but I bought a smartphone in 3rd grade.
umm.. I mean it is almost 4th grade.
>>I mean, I was almost in 4th grade then.
And I\'m very happy about I can use internet.
>>I\'m very happy to use the internet.
Before I get my phone, I borrow my parent\'s phone.
>>Before I got my phone, I borrowed my parent\'s phone.
And the first time, I always carry my phone wherever I go.
>>CORRECT!
But now I think I use internet too much.
>>CORRECT!
My Parents also think like that.
>>CORRECT!
I think I need to use my phone if I really need that.
>>CORRECT!
So now I almost didn\'t use internet without online school and power english.
>>So now I almost don\'t use the internet except for online school and power English.
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