Thursday homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Claire\'s homework
강사 첨삭
Hello Claire!
Thank you for sending your compositions today! I hope you have a wonderful weekend. ^^
~~teacher Kate
Most boring movie I watched is called \'masterpiece\'.
>>The most boring movie I\'ve watched is called \"Masterpiece\".
This movie is made in Korea.
>>CORRECT!
I watched this movie at home.
>>CORRECT!
To make story shorter, there was a person who make movie and the actor.
>>To make story shorter, there was a director and an actor.
Both of them is not famous.
>>Both of them are not famous.
They want to be famous but they didn\'t try hard. And they only have a camera.
>>CORRECT!
Even they didn\'t have light.
>>CORRECT!
They never try hard.
>>They never tried hard.
I only watched this part.
>>CORRECT!
Because it\'s too boring that I think it is waste of time.
>>CORRECT!
So I turn it off.
>>So, I turned it off.
Sorry for someone made this movie but I never recommend this movie.
>>I\'m sorry to the man who made this movie but I would never recommend watching this.
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