Thursday homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Claire\'s homework
강사 첨삭
Hello Claire!
Your answer is so beautiful! Thank you for sharing your thoughts about the homework question. See you next week! ^^
~~Teacher Kate
For my opinion I think that will never happened.
>>In my opinion, I think that will never happen.
But only for imagination, I will pick my parents.
>>But in my imagination, I will pick my parents.
They are two people but I love both of them so I will make I can choose two people.
>>They are two people but I love both of them so I will choose the two of them.
Reason that I pick my parents is person that I most love is parents.
>>The reason I picked my parents is because they are the people that I love the most.
I think almost people think like that.
>>I think most people think like that.
Also they are the first person I can see when I was born.
>>Also, they are the first people I saw when I was born.
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.