Thursday homework

Hello Claire! 

Wow that was a funny experience haha! I\'m glad you found your real parents in time. That happened to me too so it\'s okay haha. Thank you for telling your story. See you tomorrow! ^^

~~Teacher Kate

This happened when I’m 5~6 years old. 

>>This happened when I was 5~6 years old. 

I went to zoo with my family. 

>>I went to the zoo with my family. 

So our family toured the zoo and saw many interesting animals. 

>>CORRECT!

After our family tour all the animals we went to present shop from zoo.

>>After our family toured the zoo and saw all the animals, we went to the present shop in the zoo.

My parents are waiting for me to find my favorite toy.

>>My parents were waiting for me to find my favorite toy.

I am finding it far from my parents. 

>>I was searching far from my parents. 

I find the good toy for me and I want to get back to my parents. 

>>I found a good toy for me and I went to get back to my parents. 

I am finding my parents. 

>>I looked for my parents. 

Almost people are standing back because they are watching the toys. 

>>Almost people are standing with their back on me because they were looking at the toys. 

So I need to find my parent’s clothing. 

>>So, I needed to look for my parents by their clothes. 

Finally I found my father, so I said “I want this toy papa!” and touched his clothes.

>>CORRECT!

He saw me but it was not my father. It is stranger.

>>When the man looked at me, it was not my father. It was a stranger. 

So I’m very embarrassed so I ran back to my real parents!! 

>>I was so embarrassed so I ran back to my real parents. 

I think this is my most embarrassing situation that I experience in childhood.

>>I think this was my most embarrassing situation that I experienced during childhood.