Thursday homework
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Claire\'s homework
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Hello Claire!
Thank you for diligently making your homework this week! I appreciate it so much. See you tomorrow! ^^
~~teacher Kate
I don’t watch mukbang videos and I will never watch it in the future too.
>>CORRECT!
It makes me feel hungry.
>>CORRECT!
Also if I eating and watch the mukbang video at once I can’t satisfied with my meals and snacks.
>>Also, if I watch the mukbang video while eating, I can’t feel satisfied with my meals and snacks.
Cause their foods looks more delicious than home made foods from my mommy.
>>It\'s because their food looks more delicious than the homemade foods made by my mommy.
And I don’t like foods commercials too.
>>CORRECT!
When I am exercising watching videos on YouTube but there is foods commercials it destroys my healthy life.
>>When I watch exercise videos on YouTube and there are food commercials in it, it destroys my focus to lead a healthy life.
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