Thursday Homework
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Claire\'s homework
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Hi Claire!
Great job with your writing today. Keep up the good work. I also love Ocean Eyes by Billie Eilish. Try listening to her song called \"I love you\". ^^
~~teacher Kate
My favorite song is ‘Seven Rings’ from Ariana Grande and ‘Ocean Eyes’ from Billie Eillish.
>>My favorite songs are ‘Seven Rings’ from Ariana Grande and ‘Ocean Eyes’ from Billie Eillish.
Both songs are nice to hear for me.
>>CORRECT!
I just like the sound from ‘Seven Rings’.
>>CORRECT!
I like almost musics in the Ariana Grande’s music list.
>>I like most songs from Ariana Grande\'s music playlist.
I think I just love her voice.
>>CORRECT!
And ‘Ocean Eyes’ from Billie Eillish, the most sound of ‘Ocean Eyes’ is sad.
>>\"Ocean Eyes\" by Billie Eilish sounds mostly sad.
But I like that.
>>CORRECT!
Sometimes it is not bad to listen to sad music.
>>CORRECT!
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