Thursday Homework
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Claire\'s homework
강사 첨삭
Hello again Claire!
This was very well-written again! I can see that you really thought about what to write. Great job! ^^
~~Teacher Kate
When we are riding the car for a long time, we feel boring.
>>When we are riding the car for a long time, we feel bored.
I think that time is the most boring situation in my life.
>>CORRECT!
Just watching the window is boring too.
>>CORRECT!
So I watch the video on my phone, then I will get the car sick.
>>So I watch a video on my phone, but then I would get carsick.
There is nothing to do in the car.
>>CORRECT!
It’s too boring that I’m watching the moving cars from the back window.
>>It’s too boring that I just watch the moving cars from the back window.
The back window is larger than other windows in the car, so my sight is getting large and I can see many cars come and go.
>>The back window is larger than other windows in the car, so my The view is bigger and wider and I can see many cars come and go.
In this way, I can make my time flow faster.
>>This way, I can make it seem that time flows faster.
Strange thing is that when we do something fun, time flows really fast.
>>CORRECT!
But when we do boring things time flow really slowly.
>>But when we do boring things time flows really slowly.
Do you know how to spend our time fast?
>>Do you know how to make time pass quickly?
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