Thursday homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Q:What do you want to become in the future?
A:I want to be a biologist in the future.
First, I like almost of animals so I think I fit well with biologist.
Second, I am interested into nature so I\'ll fit well with biologist.
Last, I know many things about animals so I\'ll fit well with biologist.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]! Thank you for putting more details in your homework.
~Teacher Sheila
I want to be a biologist in the future.
>>CORRECT
First, I like almost of animals so I think I fit well with biologist.
>>First, I like most animals so I think I fit well being a biologist.
Second, I am interested into nature so I\'ll fit well with biologist.
>>Second, I am interested in nature so I\'ll fit well being a biologist.
Last, I know many things about animals so I\'ll fit well with biologist.
>>Last, I know many things about animals so I\'ll fit well being a biologist.
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