Thursday homework
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Q:What are the things you like about vultures?
A:I like vultures because the are awesome and the are they can fly above.
First, I think vultures are awesome because they have large wings and long neck so they are awesome.
Second, Humans cannot fly above but vultures can, so I like vultures.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름],
You have a good answer to the question. I also like vultures. The vulture is considered to be the highest-flying bird. Vultures are scavengers. It\'s their scavenging lifestyle that means the importance of vultures is often overlooked, but they are vital for the healthy functioning of ecosystems.
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Q:What are the things you like about vultures?
>> What are the things you like about vultures?
A:I like vultures because the are awesome and the are they can fly above.
>> I like vultures because they are awesome and they can fly high.
First, I think vultures are awesome because they have large wings and long neck so they are awesome.
>> First, I think vultures are awesome because they have large wings and long neck so they are awesome.
Second, Humans cannot fly above but vultures can, so I like vultures.
>> Second, humans can\'t fly high but vultures can, so I like vultures.
>> Second, humans can\'t fly high but vultures can, so I like vultures.
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Q:What are the things you like about vultures?
A:I like vultures because the are awesome and the are they can fly above.
First, I think vultures are awesome because they have large wings and long neck so they are awesome.
Second, Humans cannot fly above but vultures can, so I like vultures.
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