Thursday homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Q:What are your favorite marine animals?
A:My favorite marine animals are peacock mantis shrimp and alligator gaa.
First, I think they are very awesome so they are my favorite marine animal.
Second, I like they are very hard.
Last, I think they are very interesting so I like them.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]! Good job with your homework today!
~Teacher Sheila
>>My favorite marine animals are peacock mantis shrimp and alligator.
First, I think they are very awesome so they are my favorite marine animal.
>>First, I think they are very awesome so they are my favorite marine animals.
Second, I like they are very hard.
>>Second, I like that they are very hard.
Last, I think they are very interesting so I like them.
>>CORRECT
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