Thursday homework
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Q:What is the benefit of having a garden?
A:We have many benefit when we have a garden.
First, if we have a garden, then my family\'s land is bigger then now.
Second, if we have a garden, then I can look at insects many times.
Last, if we have a garden, then I can smell fresh air in a gerden.
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We have many benefit when we have a garden.
>>We have many benefits when we have a grarden.
First, if we have a garden, then my family\'s land is bigger then now.
>>First, if we have a garden then my family\'s land is bigger than now.
Second, if we have a garden, then I can look at insects many times.
>>Second, if we have a garden then I can look at insects many times.
Last, if we have a garden, then I can smell fresh air in a gerden.
>>Last, if we have a garden then I can smell fresh air in the garden.
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