Thursday homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Q:What is the most exciting thing when you go to shopping malls?
A:The most exciting thing when I go to shopping malls is Lego.
First, it\'s because I or my parents always buy Lego for my birthday present so I\'m exciting when I go to shopping mall.
Second, I\'m most exciting when my parents or I am going to buy Lego because if there is Lego, then I can make it so I\'m most exciting.
Last, also it\'s because if there is Lego then I can put the Lego on my desk for decoration so I can see it when I wnt to.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름],
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Teacher Annie (^^)
Q: What is the most exciting thing when you go to shopping malls?
A: The most exciting thing when I go to shopping malls is Lego.
>>> CORRECT
OR: The most exciting thing when I go to shopping malls is finding Legos.
First, it\'s because I or my parents always buy Lego for my birthday present so I\'m exciting when I go to shopping mall.
>>> First, it\'s because it\'s either my parents or I always buy Lego for my birthday present so I\'m excited when I go to the shopping mall because of it.
Second, I\'m most exciting when my parents or I am going to buy Lego because if there is Lego, then I can make it so I\'m most exciting.
>>> Second, I\'m most excited when my parents or I am going to buy Lego because if we can buy one then I can build with my new Lego.
Last, also it\'s because if there is Lego then I can put the Lego on my desk for decoration so I can see it when I wnt to.
>>> Lastly, also it\'s because if there is Lego then I can put it on my desk for decoration so I can see it when I want to.
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