Thursday homework
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강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
Thank you for doing your homework. :)
I understand that English could be really difficult.
But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.
You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^
Xoxo,
T. Christina ^^
Here are my corrections for you:
I think transportation will develop like there are no driver in transportation or it\'s very fast.
>> I think transportation will develop like there won\'t be drivers in vehicles anymore or it will be very fast.
First, I think there will be a button in transportation, so if a person push the button, then the transportation will move to the place.
>> First, I think there will be a button in a vehicle that if a person pushes that button, then the vehicle will go to the place where the person wants to go.
Second, I think the transportation will be very fast in the future, because in now some planes can fly in mach.
>> Second, I think modes of transportation will be very fast in the future, because now some planes can fly very fast.
But it will take a lot of times to develop transportation like this
>> But it will take a lot of time to develop modes of transportation like this
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