Thursday homework

2021-06-22 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

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Q:How will transportation develop in future times? A:I think transportation will develop like there are no driver in transportation or it\'s very fast. First, I think there will be a button in transportation, so if a person push the button, then the transportation will move to the place. Second, I think the transportation will be very fast in the future, because in now some planes can fly in mach. But it will take a lot of times to develop transportation like this

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:


I think transportation will develop like there are no driver in transportation or it\'s very fast.

>> I think transportation will develop like there won\'t be drivers in vehicles anymore or it will be very fast.
First, I think there will be a button in transportation, so if a person push the button, then the transportation will move to the place.

>> First, I think there will be a button in a vehicle that if a person pushes that button, then the vehicle will go to the place where the person wants to go.
Second, I think the transportation will be very fast in the future, because in now some planes can fly in mach.

>> Second, I think modes of transportation will be very fast in the future, because now some planes can fly very fast.
But it will take a lot of times to develop transportation like this

>> But it will take a lot of time to develop modes of transportation like this

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