Thursday homework

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:

I think fast food, soda, and sweets should not sold in school cafeterias.

>> I think fast food, soda, and sweets should not be sold in school cafeterias.
First, school is a place that teaching the right thing, but that foods are bad at people\'s health.

>> First of all, a school is a place that teaches the right thing to do, but those kinds of food are bad for people\'s health.
Second, if a student has diabetes, and if it\'s because of soda in a school, then people will think that school is bad school.

>> Second, if a student has diabetes and if it\'s caused by a soda from school, then people will think that school is a bad school.
But, I think selling fast food, soda, and sweets one time in a month is not that bad to students.

>> But, I think selling fast food, soda, and sweets once a month is not that bad for students.