Thursday homework

2021-07-09 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

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Q:What was the longest flight you have ever taken? A:The longest flight I\'ve ever taken was the flight that\'s coming back to Korea from U.S. I was in that flight for thirteen hours, so I slept in there and I ate some foods too. And it was so boring, so I watched a movie. Also, my mother was in business class, and she liked it except the food. When we left U.S, it was afternoon, and when we came back to Korea it was afternoon too, so it was so weird.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!
Thank you for doing your homework. :)
I understand that English could be really difficult.
But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.
You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^
Xoxo,
T. Christina ^^
Here are my corrections for you:

The longest flight I\'ve ever taken was the flight that\'s coming back to Korea from U.S.
>> The longest flight I\'ve ever taken was the flight I took coming back to Korea from the U.S.
I was in that flight for thirteen hours, so I slept in there and I ate some foods too.
>> I was in that flight for thirteen hours so I slept in the plane and I ate some food too.
And it was so boring, so I watched a movie.
>> It was so boring so I watched a movie.
Also, my mother was in business class, and she liked it except the food.
>> My mother was also in business class and she liked it except for the food.
When we left U.S, it was afternoon, and when we came back to Korea it was afternoon too, so it was so weird.
>> When we left the U.S, it was afternoon, and when we arrived in Korea, it was afternoon too, so it was so weird.

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