Thursday homework

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:

It\'s necessary to advertise because if a company advertise a thing, then many people can know the thing.

>> It\'s necessary to advertise because if a company advertises a product, then people will know about it.
Also, if advertisement is funny or interesting, then many people will remember that advertisement.

>> Also, if an advertisement is funny or interesting, many people will remember that advertisement.
But I think many people think advertisement is boring thing, and they are not interested in advertisement.

>> But I think a lot of people think advertisements are boring and they are not interested in them.