Thursday homework
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HOMEWORK:
What do you like about your neighborhood?
Actually, I don\'t meet my neighborhood a lot.
But there is a thing I like about my neighborhood.
Both two neighborhoods next to my house right-hand side and left-hand side are animal lovers.
They each raise cats and dogs.
On my right-hand side neighborhood raise a cat and a dog.
And my left-hand side neighborhood raises a dog.
I heard dogs barking from those two neighborhoods.
And for the right-hand side neighborhood, I saw the warning paper written \'Do not push the bell button dog will be surprised. Just knock on the door.\'.
As a cat-raising person, I like people who love animals.
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Hello Claire!
Thanks for the lovely writing. I love animal lovers too. See you tomorrow! ^^
~~Teacher Kate
>>Actually, I don\'t meet my neighbors a lot.
But there is a thing I like about my neighborhood.
But there is a thing I like about my neighborhood.
>>CORRECT!
Both two neighborhoods next to my house right-hand side and left-hand side are animal lovers.
Both two neighborhoods next to my house right-hand side and left-hand side are animal lovers.
>>Both neighbors next to my house right-hand side and left-hand side are animal lovers.
They each raise cats and dogs.
They each raise cats and dogs.
>>CORRECT!
On my right-hand side neighborhood raise a cat and a dog.
On my right-hand side neighborhood raise a cat and a dog.
>>The neighbor on my right side raises a cat and a dog.
And my left-hand side neighborhood raises a dog.
And my left-hand side neighborhood raises a dog.
>>And my left-hand side neighbor raises a dog.
I heard dogs barking from those two neighborhoods.
I heard dogs barking from those two neighborhoods.
>>I heard dogs barking from those two apartments.
And for the right-hand side neighborhood, I saw the warning paper written \'Do not push the bell button dog will be surprised. Just knock on the door.\'.
And for the right-hand side neighborhood, I saw the warning paper written \'Do not push the bell button dog will be surprised. Just knock on the door.\'.
>>On the door of my neighbor living on the left side, there is a sign posted saying, \'Do not push the door bell, the dog will be surprised. Just knock on the door.\'.
As a cat-raising person, I like people who love animals.
As a cat-raising person, I like people who love animals.
>>As a person who raises a cat, I like people who love animals.
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