Thursday homework

2021-07-30 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

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Q:Do you like Hollywood movies? A:I like Hollywood movies. First, their are a lot of masterpiece in Hollywood movies, so I could enjoyed the movies. Second, if I watch Hollywood movies, then it changes my emotions, so I can sympathy with characters.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!
Thank you for doing your homework. :)
I understand that English could be really difficult.
But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.
You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^
Xoxo,
T. Christina ^^
Here are my corrections for you:

I like Hollywood movies.
>> CORRECT!
First, their are a lot of masterpiece in Hollywood movies, so I could enjoyed the movies.
>> There are a lot of masterpiece in Hollywood movies, so I could enjoy these movies.
Second, if I watch Hollywood movies, then it changes my emotions, so I can sympathy with characters.
>> If I watch Hollywood movies, then it changes my emotions and I can feel sympathy with the characters.

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