Thursday homework

2021-08-13 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

학생이 쓴 원문

Q:What is healthy food? A:There are a lot of kinds of healthy foods Most of vegetables and fruits are healthy to our body, and there\'s many vitamins in vegetables especially fruits. Healthy food means a good food that is and make people healthy and strong.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:


There are a lot of kinds of healthy foods

>> There are a lot of kinds of healthy foods.

OR

>> There are many kinds of healthy food.
Most of vegetables and fruits are healthy to our body, and there\'s many vitamins in vegetables especially fruits.

>> Most of vegetables and fruits are healthy for our body, and there are many vitamins in vegetables and fruits.
Healthy food means a good food that is and make people healthy and strong.

>> Healthy food means good food that makes people healthy and strong.

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