Thursday homework

2021-08-19 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

학생이 쓴 원문

Q:Does your hometown have any festivals? A:I\'m not sure but I think our hometown doesn\'t have a festivals. I\'m not sure of that because I only live 5 years in hometown, and there was corona throughout 2 years. But I think our hometown does not have because my friend lived here for long time but he didn\'t say anything about festivals.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:


I\'m not sure but I think our hometown doesn\'t have a festivals.

>> I\'m not sure but I think our hometown doesn\'t have festivals.
I\'m not sure of that because I only live 5 years in hometown, and there was corona throughout 2 years.

>> I\'m not sure of that because I have only been living here for 5 years, and there is the coronavirus situation in the 2 years.
But I think our hometown does not have because my friend lived here for long time but he didn\'t say anything about festivals.

>> But I think our hometown does not have any because my friend has been living here for a long time and he didn\'t say anything about festivals.

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