Thursday homework

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:

I enjoy traveling.

>> CORRECT!
Firstly, there are a lot of things to watch or to experience, so I feel very happy when I\'m traveling.

>> First of all, there are a lot of things to watch or to experience so I feel very happy when I\'m traveling.
Also, I buy some souvenirs if I travel somewhere, so I can decorate my room more than before, and I can remember there longer.

>> Also, I buy some souvenirs when I travel somewhere so I can decorate my room with it and they will remind me of my travels.