Thursday homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
Thank you for doing your homework. :)
I understand that English could be really difficult.
But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.
You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^
Xoxo,
T. Christina ^^
Here are my corrections for you:
Most of reptiles, Willow, and some insects are beautiful for me.
>> Most reptiles, Willows, and some insects are beautiful for me.
I know that many other people don\'t like reptiles, and some insects, but I like them very much.
>> I know that many people don\'t like reptiles, and some insects, but I like them very much.
I like most of reptiles, and some insects because I think the are cool, or cute and I like Willow because their leaves are facing down.
>> I like most reptiles, and some insects because I think they are cool, or cute.
and I like Willow because their leaves are facing down.
>> I like Willows because their leaves are facing down.
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