Thursday homework

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:

I\'m not sure about that, but I think if the rich is entrepreneur then I think it\'s true.

>> I\'m not sure about that, but I think if the rich is an entrepreneur then I think it\'s true.
Entrepreneur can get money almost infinity, so he or she can be more richer.

>> Entrepreneurs can get money almost for infinity, so he or she can become richer.
But if the poor don\'t give up trying, then someday, he or she can be a rich or public person.
>> But if the poor don\'t give up trying, then someday, he or she can be a rich or popular person.