Thursday homework
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강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
Thank you for doing your homework. :)
I understand that English could be really difficult.
But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.
You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^
Xoxo,
T. Christina ^^
Here are my corrections for you:
I think the most dangerous countries in the world is Brazil and some countries in Africa.
>> I think the most dangerous countries in the world are Brazil and Africa.
There are many wild predators in some countries in Africa like lions or hyena.
>> There are many wild predators in Africa like lions or hyenas.
Also, in Brazil amazon river, there are a lot of dangerous animals that can hurt people too.
>> In Brazil\'s amazon river, there are a lot of dangerous animals that can hurt people too.
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