Thursday homework

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:

My hometown is Bucheon and I\'m living there, and the main attraction is comic museum.

>> My hometown is Bucheon and I\'m currently living here.

the main attraction is comic museum.

>> The main attraction here is the comic museum.
Comic is very famous in Bucheon, so there is a comic museum in Bucheon.

>> Comics are very famous in Bucheon that\'s why there is a comic museum here.
Also, many people go there every year, so comic museum is the main attraction in my hometown.

>> Also, many people go there every year so the comic museum is the main attraction in my hometown.