Thursday homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
Thank you for doing your homework. :)
I understand that English could be really difficult.
But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.
You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^
Xoxo,
T. Christina ^^
Here are my corrections for you:
I think I just wait for dinner.
>> CORRECT!
I don\'t eat snack even if I\'m just hungry except when I\'m very hungry.
>> I don\'t eat a snack even if I\'m just hungry, except when I\'m very hungry.
Snack can make people fat in a short time, so people should refrain from eating snack when it\'s a little hungry.
>> Snacks can make people fat in a short time, so people should refrain from eating snacks when they\'re just a little hungry.
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