Thursday homework

2021-12-11 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

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Q:Do you think that TV makes people lazy? A:I think TV makes some people lazy. If there is a funny content, then people can think \'Only one minutes more.\' so they can be lazy. But not all people because some people don\'t think like that.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:


I think TV makes some people lazy.

>> CORRECT!
If there is a funny content, then people can think \'Only one minutes more.\' 

>> If there is a funny content, then people can think, \"I\'ll watch for only one minute more.\"

so they can be lazy.

>> So in that sense, they can be lazy.
But not all people because some people don\'t think like that.

>> But not all people are that way because some people don\'t think like that.

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