Thursday homework

2021-12-30 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

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Q:What are your New Year\'s resolutions? A:My New Year\'s resolutions are I\'ll to exercise everyday and to don\'t lie and I\'ll really try to do filial piety to my parents every time. I made a new resolutions because I think what I did before were just for me. Also if I do filial piety to my parents, I can make our house feel better.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:


My New Year\'s resolutions are I\'ll to exercise everyday and to don\'t lie and I\'ll really try to do filial piety to my parents every time.

>> My New Year\'s resolutions are; I\'ll exercise everyday, not lie, and I\'ll really try to do filial piety to my parents every time.
I made a new resolutions because I think what I did before were just for me.

>> I made new resolutions because I think what I did before were just for me.
Also if I do filial piety to my parents, I can make our house feel better.

>> Also, if I do filial piety to my parents, I can make the ambiance in our house better.

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