Thursday homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
Thank you for doing your homework. :)
I understand that English could be really difficult.
But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.
You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^
Xoxo,
T. Christina ^^
Here are my corrections for you:
I can\'t give any advice someone who is very busy because I\'ve never been busy.
>> I can\'t give any advice to someone who is very busy because I\'ve never been busy.
But I can say that sometimes you should get some rest or you can be very tired next day.
>> But I can say that sometimes, you should get some rest or you might feel very tired the next day.
Also, they can do something that can give fun to him or her when they\'re resting.
>> Also, they can do something that is fun for him or her when they\'re resting.
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