Thursday homework

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:

I think it can influence me temporary.

>> I think it can influence me temporarily.
Actually, if I listen to a music for a long time, then it can influence my behavior for a long time.

>> CORRECT!
If I listen to a music, then I just do something to the beat of the music, or I sing along to the music

>> When I listen to music, I just do something along with the beat of the music, or I sing along to the music.