Thursday homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
Thank you for doing your homework. :)
I understand that English could be really difficult.
But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.
You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^
Xoxo,
T. Christina ^^
Here are my corrections for you:
If the opponent is who I know, then I argue but if the opponent is who I don\'t know, I just walk away.
>> If the opponent is someone I know, then I will argue with them, but if it\'s someone I don\'t know, I will just walk away.
Actually, I don\'t like to talk with someone who is not that familier, so I usually just walk away.
>> Actually, I don\'t like to talk with someone who is not that familiar to me, so I usually just walk away.
But I like to debate or argue with other person, because if I do them, then I can have a better opinion.
>> But I like to debate or argue with other people, because if I do, then I can have a better opinion.
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