Thursday homework

2022-02-11 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

학생이 쓴 원문

Q:What is one thing you have tried to change, but couldn\'t? A:Once, I\'ve tried to not eat snacks, but I failed. Actually, I eat snacks less then that time, but I failed to to what I\'ve tried to. I think there are more things that I\'ve failed to change, but I don\'t remember them.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:


Once, I\'ve tried to not eat snacks, but I failed.

>> CORRECT!

OR

>> I tried not to eat snacks once but I failed.
Actually, I eat snacks less then that time, but I failed to to what I\'ve tried to.

>> Actually, I eat snacks less than that time, but I failed to do what I\'ve tried to do.
I think there are more things that I\'ve failed to change, but I don\'t remember them.

>> CORRECT!


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