Thursday homework

2022-02-21 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

학생이 쓴 원문

Q:If you could influence people like a celebrity does, how would you use it for the benefit of the planet? A:I will help the people who need help and I will do many things for the earth. Even if I\'m not like a celebrity, I will do these things. There are a lot of people who need help like refugees, the poor, and some Africans. Also, for now, the earth is contaminated, so it needs help a lot.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!
Thank you for doing your homework. :)
I understand that English could be really difficult.
But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.
You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^
Xoxo,
T. Christina ^^
Here are my corrections for you:

I will help the people who need help and I will do many things for the earth.
>> CORRECT!
Even if I\'m not like a celebrity, I will do these things.
>> CORRECT!
There are a lot of people who need help like refugees, the poor, and some Africans.
>> CORRECT!
Also, for now, the earth is contaminated, so it needs help a lot.
>> Also, for now, the earth is contaminated, so it needs a lot of help.

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