Thursday homework

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:

The good thing is that people can get infromation fastly, and the bad thing is people could be addiction to computer.

>> The good thing is that people can get information quickly, and the bad thing is that people could become addicted to a computer.
Before, when people didn\'t invented computer people should get information at the library, and it takes so long time, but not now.

>> Before the computer has been invented, people get information at the library and it takes a long time to get it, but not anymore now.
But, nowadays many people are addiction to computer, so their eyes would be not good and they could be lazy.

>> Nowadays, many people are addicted to the computer, it has a bad effect on their eyes and they tend to become lazy.