Thursday homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Q:If you were a song, what song would you be and why?
A:If I was a song, I would be one of song that I like.
Even if many people don\'t like the song, if I like it, then other people\'s opinion doesn\'t matter.
Also, most of the song that I like has a sad theme, so I like them.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
Thank you for doing your homework. :)
I understand that English could be really difficult.
But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.
You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^
Xoxo,
T. Christina ^^
Here are my corrections for you:
If I was a song, I would be one of song that I like.
>> If I was a song, I would be one of songs that I like.
Even if many people don\'t like the song, if I like it, then other people\'s opinion doesn\'t matter.
>> CORRECT!
Also, most of the song that I like has a sad theme, so I like them.
>> CORRECT!
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