Thursday homework

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:

i don\'t like living in the city that much.

>> I don\'t like living in the city that much.
There\'s so many noises in the city, and also there\'s gas not that good at body.

>> There\'s so many noises in the city, and there\'s also a lot of gas that is not good for body.
I want to live in a place that there\'s not that much people and peaceful place.

>> I want to live in a place where there\'s not that much people and a peaceful one.