Thursday homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
Thank you for doing your homework. :)
I understand that English could be really difficult.
But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.
You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^
Xoxo,
T. Christina ^^
Here are my corrections for you:
I think cake is the food that bring back special memories.
>> I think cake is the food that brings back special memories.
Because I always eat cake when it\'s special day, so I always bring my memories by eating cake.
>> Because I always eat cake when it\'s a special day, so I always remember memories by eating cake.
Also, we always eat cake when it\'s birthday so I like cake.
>> Also, we always eat cake when it\'s someone\'s birthday so I like cake.
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