Thursday homework

2022-04-30 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

학생이 쓴 원문

Q:Do you expect a gift from your parents every time it’s your birthday? Why or why not? A:I always expect a gift from my parents. I know what\'s my birthday gift, but the feeling what I feel when I\'m waiting for my present is good. I usually receive LEGO bricks for my birthday gift so I feel good when I\'m making it.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!
Thank you for doing your homework. :)
I understand that English could be really difficult.
But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.
You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^
Xoxo,
T. Christina ^^
Here are my corrections for you:

I always expect a gift from my parents.
>> CORRECT!
I know what\'s my birthday gift, but the feeling what I feel when I\'m waiting for my present is good.
>> I know what\'s my birthday gift, but the feeling that I feel when I\'m waiting for my present is good.
I usually receive LEGO bricks for my birthday gift so I feel good when I\'m making it.
>> CORRECT!

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