Thursday homework

2022-06-04 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

학생이 쓴 원문

Q:Does your hometown have any festivals? What happens at that festival? A:I think there\'s no festival in hometown. I\'m living in my hometown, but there\'s no festival here. But I\'m not sure because I\'m not that interested about what happen in our town.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:


I think there\'s no festival in hometown.

>> I think there\'s no festival in my hometown.
I\'m living in my hometown, but there\'s no festival here.

>> CORRECT!
But I\'m not sure because I\'m not that interested about what happen in our town.

>> But I\'m not sure because I\'m not that interested in what\'s happening in our town.

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