Thursday homework

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:

The advantage of shopping at a mall is there are a lot of goods.

>> CORRECT!
And the disadvantage of shopping at a mall is there are a lot of goods.

>> At the same time, the disadvantage of shopping at a mall is there are a lot of goods.
If there are a lot of goods in a mall, then there would be a thing which I\'m finding for.

>> If there are a lot of goods in a mall, then the thing I\'m looking for would most likely be there.
But the mall is too big, so it\'s not that easy to find the thing by myself.

>> But the mall is too big, so it\'s not that easy to find that thing by myself.