Thursday homework

2022-10-07 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

학생이 쓴 원문

Q: Does sadness play an important role in people’s lives? A: I think sadness play an important role in people\'s lives. If people don\'t feel sad, then a lot of things could be meaningless. Usually, people think sadness is negative feeling, but I think sadness is the process which makes a person stronger.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!
Thank you for doing your homework. :)
I understand that English could be really difficult.
But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.
You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^
Xoxo,
T. Christina ^^
Here are my corrections for you:

I think sadness play an important role in people\'s lives.
>> CORRECT!
If people don\'t feel sad, then a lot of things could be meaningless.
>> CORRECT!
Usually, people think sadness is negative feeling, but I think sadness is the process which makes a person stronger.
>> Usually, people think sadness is a negative feeling, but I think sadness is the process which makes a person stronger.

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